Under the category of phone players you mentioned certain browsers cause problems. Well for me the itch.io Launcher has the same problem on PC. Everytime I boot it up, it loads more or less instantly to about 90% and then gets stuck (It seems to always stop at the same point). Five minutes of waiting didnt resolve that. On Chrome it works fine though and is quite fun ;)
could be useful to increase the amount of time the splurt button is there and have it at the continue/request screen. jedyne had me edge and accidently ruined, but there was no way to input that into the game because by the time the ruin happened the button disappeared
this is amazing. A little feedback: I know JOI's are mostly for submissives, I kinda can enjoy being dominated but I naturally lean the other way. If you add girl(s) that is totally, outwardly submissive that might drive me crazy (and make more players feel included).
Gooner thought bro. If you a piercing on the tip of your dick and then like took that shit out would you be able to nut in 3 directions? Are there people out there Hydra Nutting?
Absolutely love this! If I had one thing I'd wanna suggest is maybe gender options? I get that JOI is more geared towards guys, but trans girls deserve to edge their brains out too! I also realize that could lead to redraws of some scenes, so I get if you'd rather not, but even a pronouns and boy/girl switch would be nice.
Sorry for my blatant aassumption on how you've coded your game but couldn't you just make some kind of script that runs when the player clicks a button for she/her or they/them pronouns that effectively just scans for every use of "he, him, his, he's" and switch them with the appropriate pronoun choice? Obviously you'd need to be case sensitive but from my understanding it doesn't seem like "a lot of extra work."
Nah, it's not that simple, every line is hardcoded in, even changing the timings requires me to go line per line, here I'd need to replace the pronouns each time with variables on a project with thousands of lines of dialog. Can't do an automatic thing either because sometimes the girls might say "he" and not refer to the player. Also would need to figure out if it needs to replace "his" for "hers" and so on or lowercase/uppercase like you said yada yada. Sure, a skilled coder would pull it off in a flash but my bird artist brain can't.
That's from a technical perspective, but since I have the chance to point this out now I'd say that Anon is canonically a he. Has been referred to as such in my comics from the start and I want to keep it that way.
this game is definitely the best JOI game i have ever played, i do have some suggestions (you can just ignore them if you want)
difficulty system, i played this game a few times and i confess that sometimes im up to a shorter session, so a easy mode where you gain more points than the usual would come in handy, the opposite would also apply to a hard mode, although, the latter already has a solution which is getting the higher point characters, but still
a option to turn off the music, its not bad music, its just kinda gets repetitive when you play the game for so long
and one that i think would be a killer thing to add, but probably wont be added for budget reasons is voice acting, i confess that sometimes i have trouble reading the text when i get "lost in the sauce" (for the lack of a better term) plus having an actual voice read the text would definitely be very stimulating (and maybe not many people would mind the text being slow)
I do have plans for "difficulty", some sisters will have considerably cheaper prices than the ones currently in the game, so if you want to win early, they'll let you do so.
I'll look into the music, shouldn't be too hard but then again the game is kinda hold together via duct tape lol (artist brain)
VA is quite pricey, if I ever add it I'd like to be in japanese, there's a lot of VA from Japan I'd love to work with, but that'd mean adding a jp localization, which is even pricier than the VA itself...
Really amazing game! One thing I found was when I had the Nanako scene where she jerks off MC it wasn't clear if I was meant to jerk off or not as there was no metronome. So I just watched the speed of what was happening in the cutscene. Not trying to be not picky just wasn't sure if that's been mentioned.
This is my first playthrough and so far the game is amazing i love the artwork, from what i see all you need to fix is the intro loading other than that everything is perfect, 10/10 very good game.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! Intro is now skippable after you name the protag. If you lose/win that also gets saved and will prompt new dialog the next run.
the intro is a little bit long, as others pointed out, which wouldn't be a problem in itself if you either didn't have to watch it everytime you wanna start a session or were be able to skip it
the game does not tell you (clearly) that if you dont pay the ransom your punishment is only more edging
Thanks for the feedback! Updated the game, you can now skip the intro after you input your name. The game also saves your progress if you lose/win and skips it next time automatically, this was there before but accidentally reloading would make it so you had to sit through it all again.
Newgrounds works on my end. Gem of a game that screams passion project, pretty unique art style for these types of games which adds to the experience. Overall W game in my opinion.
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Love the game come here Everytime to play it me encantó. But could you add some anal or vaginal? If not it's ok buena suerte keep up the good work.
Will you implement a way to customize the MC's skin color?
that'd require a lot of redrawing, so no, sorry
Under the category of phone players you mentioned certain browsers cause problems. Well for me the itch.io Launcher has the same problem on PC. Everytime I boot it up, it loads more or less instantly to about 90% and then gets stuck (It seems to always stop at the same point). Five minutes of waiting didnt resolve that. On Chrome it works fine though and is quite fun ;)
could be useful to increase the amount of time the splurt button is there and have it at the continue/request screen. jedyne had me edge and accidently ruined, but there was no way to input that into the game because by the time the ruin happened the button disappeared
this is amazing. A little feedback: I know JOI's are mostly for submissives, I kinda can enjoy being dominated but I naturally lean the other way. If you add girl(s) that is totally, outwardly submissive that might drive me crazy (and make more players feel included).
thank you!
also Emmi is pretty submissive so there's already some of that content
Gooner thought bro. If you a piercing on the tip of your dick and then like took that shit out would you be able to nut in 3 directions? Are there people out there Hydra Nutting?
That's Cray Cray.
You should make a download so we don't have to use browser
I like Jedyne, she gave me hella ppbs and was fun, keep up this awesome work im definitely considering supporting
(idk how to write this without sounding like a sterotypical gooner)
how many D's in here?! Im tired... it been 2.5h
Is there any way to save your progress in this web version?
Absolutely love this! If I had one thing I'd wanna suggest is maybe gender options? I get that JOI is more geared towards guys, but trans girls deserve to edge their brains out too! I also realize that could lead to redraws of some scenes, so I get if you'd rather not, but even a pronouns and boy/girl switch would be nice.
that would require a lot of extra work so I have no plans for it
Sorry for my blatant aassumption on how you've coded your game but couldn't you just make some kind of script that runs when the player clicks a button for she/her or they/them pronouns that effectively just scans for every use of "he, him, his, he's" and switch them with the appropriate pronoun choice? Obviously you'd need to be case sensitive but from my understanding it doesn't seem like "a lot of extra work."
Nah, it's not that simple, every line is hardcoded in, even changing the timings requires me to go line per line, here I'd need to replace the pronouns each time with variables on a project with thousands of lines of dialog. Can't do an automatic thing either because sometimes the girls might say "he" and not refer to the player. Also would need to figure out if it needs to replace "his" for "hers" and so on or lowercase/uppercase like you said yada yada. Sure, a skilled coder would pull it off in a flash but my bird artist brain can't.
That's from a technical perspective, but since I have the chance to point this out now I'd say that Anon is canonically a he. Has been referred to as such in my comics from the start and I want to keep it that way.
Gooner and transphobic is crazy, pick a struggle😂🙏
I'm a dev, if u want help distributing on multiple platforms let me know. I understood that you made this purely with HTML5.
I can export to other platforms but I don't wanna juggle multiple builds per release, this is a nice middleground for all
eventually I'll release it as an .exe
Can you make it downloadable please🙏
right now I only have an html5 version, which requires you to host it somewhere(either your machine with some trickery or internet)
Thank you for telling me . I like your idea with the numbers for replayability maybe you should try and add more I really like that idea.
i'd be fine with that, there's plenty of html games that you download and just open the game itself in browser
this game is definitely the best JOI game i have ever played, i do have some suggestions (you can just ignore them if you want)
difficulty system, i played this game a few times and i confess that sometimes im up to a shorter session, so a easy mode where you gain more points than the usual would come in handy, the opposite would also apply to a hard mode, although, the latter already has a solution which is getting the higher point characters, but still
a option to turn off the music, its not bad music, its just kinda gets repetitive when you play the game for so long
and one that i think would be a killer thing to add, but probably wont be added for budget reasons is voice acting, i confess that sometimes i have trouble reading the text when i get "lost in the sauce" (for the lack of a better term) plus having an actual voice read the text would definitely be very stimulating (and maybe not many people would mind the text being slow)
thank you so much for the feedback
I do have plans for "difficulty", some sisters will have considerably cheaper prices than the ones currently in the game, so if you want to win early, they'll let you do so.
I'll look into the music, shouldn't be too hard but then again the game is kinda hold together via duct tape lol (artist brain)
VA is quite pricey, if I ever add it I'd like to be in japanese, there's a lot of VA from Japan I'd love to work with, but that'd mean adding a jp localization, which is even pricier than the VA itself...
no downloading this game oooph that bites
Loving the game for far! Hopefully there will be a way to download the game in the future.
someday, sure, for now I don't wanna bother with more than one build at a time, my previous game was a hassle to juggle through 2
shit I think I know why that happens!
I'll see if I can upload a fix
pace ruins the game it is incredibly boring
I think this is one of the best joi games that exists at the moment, at least from those that I have seen, the best for me personally
Great job! I hope in the future you will continue to surprise with your ideas
10/10
Thank you!
There weren't a lot of joi focused games so I tried my hand at making one!
Really amazing game! One thing I found was when I had the Nanako scene where she jerks off MC it wasn't clear if I was meant to jerk off or not as there was no metronome. So I just watched the speed of what was happening in the cutscene. Not trying to be not picky just wasn't sure if that's been mentioned.
Thank you!
I assume you mean her handjob scene?
If it's not a JOI section then instead of metronome there's the actual contact sounds for immersion!
Gotcha my bad lol
would you make an option to download it
eventually!
nanako has some event where it says "something grabs you" twice at the beginning
Release on steam
maybe someday!
Looks like a gem. My respect to the developer. But if you plan to expand and switch to another engine, I'd recommend doing it as early as possible.
Thanks!
And no, I don't plan to switch engines.
this game is held back by its text speed its like this game was made for a 3rd grade reading level :(
meh, considering its a game about edging, im pretty sure its slow on purpose, considering it can increase the fun
The text moves so incredibly slow its painful, who need this much time to read ??? No matter how good everything else is , it totally kills the game
Let me fast read with a button, for me that likes to fly read can't stand slow pace text show.
The pace is heavily hard-coded unfortunately.
oh sorry forgot the important part, I meant the intro, i wanted to follow and read it but its on the same pace as the game, slow.
is there a way to download/install the game? also i duckin love the art my guy GREAT job, be proud of yourself.
Thank you!
For now it's browser only, I didn't want to deal with multiple builds at once, maybe further down the line I'll make an executable for desktop.
This is my first playthrough and so far the game is amazing i love the artwork, from what i see all you need to fix is the intro loading other than that everything is perfect, 10/10 very good game.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Intro is now skippable after you name the protag. If you lose/win that also gets saved and will prompt new dialog the next run.
youre very welcome, im wondering if you ever plan to animate the scenes in the future, or do something similar to that
No, that'd require me to redraw all the game's cgs, multiple times.
very good game, but i could give some feedback
the intro is a little bit long, as others pointed out, which wouldn't be a problem in itself if you either didn't have to watch it everytime you wanna start a session or were be able to skip it
the game does not tell you (clearly) that if you dont pay the ransom your punishment is only more edging
with that being said, nanako is the best girl
Thanks for the feedback!
Updated the game, you can now skip the intro after you input your name. The game also saves your progress if you lose/win and skips it next time automatically, this was there before but accidentally reloading would make it so you had to sit through it all again.
nice
Can't see the entire right side of the screen, making the tutorial impossible. Using an android device.
Confirmed on my end, something with itch.io I'm afraid.
An awkward fix is to scroll to the top-right once it's opened and click on the expand icon, that should frame it properly.
If that doesn't work, try it on newgrounds!
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/955754
Sorry for the inconvencience!
Newgrounds works on my end. Gem of a game that screams passion project, pretty unique art style for these types of games which adds to the experience. Overall W game in my opinion.
Thank you!
is it normal to for my loading to be stuck on tuning for like 10 minutes
It isn't, on pc or phone?
I just accidently refreshed halfway through the intro im gonna end it all 💔
Yeah I didn't account for accidents like that.
Just pushed an update so you can skip it after naming the protagonist!
Thank you 🙏
very cool! please add a button to skip intro
Thank you very much!
Button added and updated!
I love the art. The girls are super hot. I worship them gladly. The game could use a little refinement, but over all it is a definite 9/10.
Thank you so much!
I couldnt stand intro.. So skip this one
You can skip it now!
Yeah, should've been from the beginning. But it is now, I pushed an update for that!
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thanks!
w game
thank you!